Through the cold fingers
That caress my skin,
I see the light appear:
Bringing a gentle touch
Of warmth
Beyond the cold embrace.
I breathe in your touch
As I feel the warmth
Seep into my skin:
As the cold recedes,
I reach out
And take you within.
Touch (revised) by Allison Brown is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Non-Commercial-Share Alike 2.5 Australia License. Based on a work at www.allisonbrown.blogspot.com.
1 comment:
Nice work with the revision. It's a shame you lost the two-syllable rhythm of the second-last verse, but I know how difficult it was becoming to work around keeping it there.
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