tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32110533.post8581876463717164902..comments2022-11-30T07:49:07.119+13:00Comments on To Write is to Dream...: Touch (revised)Allison Brownhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15421003416125711649noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32110533.post-80807371805048306662008-05-17T12:42:00.000+12:002008-05-17T12:42:00.000+12:00Nice work with the revision. It's a shame you los...Nice work with the revision. It's a shame you lost the two-syllable rhythm of the second-last verse, but I know how difficult it was becoming to work around keeping it there.Graemehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18162344595651366012noreply@blogger.com