Thursday, July 22, 2010

Raw

Emotions sit upon me
Gulp, gasp
Spinning, sinking
Inhaling each motion
Float with a tide
Rushing over my mind
Make me still
Numb, overwhelmed
Movement, raw
Falling into depths
Dark corners
Hidden thoughts
Building up
Breath, see
Turn away...

3 comments:

Anna Piutti said...

Beautiful and intense!

Allison Brown said...

When I did see your comment it meant a lot to me Anna - what inspired this piece was exactly what you wrote "beautiful and intense!". Yet somehow I never actually showed my appreciation by responding at the time.

Rhett said...

Nice poem...you are swimming among words at present - one day you'll learn to fly -